Au contraire, mon frère on what everyone else had said negatively about your work here, I happen to like your detail on the equipment and the body itself. The shading on the body, as well as the shade it casts is at a good angle, and highlights most everything very well. People are so bent on shininess (uh... the act of giving a shiny effect to EVERYTHING). If it doesn't have color dodge all over the place, it isn't a good picture. AND THAT'S WHERE I BECOME A NAY-SAYER. You earned this from me.
The style is still fallout even though the lines have become somewhat sharper and more precise; something which shows how your unique style still evolves. Your colour work in this piece is vibrant and clean, another step up from previous work. I can't wait to see a a large scale piece of work posted in the future.