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...is hard. At least, to Halcyon. I guess she's rubbing her nose. *shrugs*

Teh pic has problems. Feel free to point them out. I spent way too long on this. Several days, on and off.

Pencil sketch and Photoshop 7 / tablet.

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:iconkrazedkazoo:
Ahh, so awesome.... I like this... But for some reason, her wings remind me of water.... It this how you wanted it to turn out? Because it's not bad... Just doesn't seem very real... But other than that, it's gorgeous!

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:iconpadayappa:
I thik it's quite amazing. good job mr matt page. those feet are something to adore. along with your detail
:iconnashya:
O_O I adore your style. To see you say there are mistakes puzzles me a bit. I don't see them, I only see 'Style'. The only thing I can really see that would be a mistake is the perspective of her leg, it should look a bit wider towards the ankle. Other then that all i see is a beautiful piece of art. And blue, love that color, you couldn't have picked a better shade of it. Not only that, the subtle use of orange (blues complimentary color) and green adds a nice amount of depth that leads your eye to the central character. And you didn't use a solid black for the leather of her outfit. This is a great piece and again I can't wait to see more from you.
:iconsezurei:
i really like the feel and textrue of the wings.
but, the way the ground fades into the sky bothers me visually.

:heart:
overall, a great piece.

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-Life is an odd facade of moments pieced together with anger, pain, and lust. ..something just aren't meant to make sense. ironic i s'pose, that those are the things we try hardest to understand.-

=these cuts are leaving creases - trace the scars to fit the pieces=

//be.my.serrated.sweetheart.an d.ill.be.your.barcode.slave//
:iconshadowmanic:
OMi gawd this is sooo precious! I aven't seen one of her ina while purdy job ^^

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My love for you is like a truck.
icon by =BGArts <3
:icondai-chan:
omg... i wanna hug her ;; she looks so sad.
my first thought when i saw this picture was "holy hell o.O look at that detail"
youve always been amazing at that XD

i guess the only thing that bothers me about the picture is the size of the feet, i think there is too much of a difference there for merely a perspective approach, the feet arent that far apart. other than that this is absolutly amazing. worth the time you put into it. those wings are amazing, you have thee most unique way of drawing wings, i could name em in a heartbeat, esspecially with the armor that you put on them sometimes. the gloves and the boot... leg warmer.. armor... things o.O? are, incredible. you and belts man... ya just match. ^^

fantastic job.
:iconmodred189:
I like it. The colors are nice, though adding a few brightly contrasting points of red or Yellow on his/her outfit would really lend to a sense of depth, and do away with the monochromeness. I don't even know if that is a word. ..., lol

Ayway, the composition is well done as are the details on the wings. Some more depth in the hair would be good.

+fav!!!

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"The difference between me and a madman is, simply, that I am mad."
- Salvador Dali

"We are the music makers, we are the dreamers of the dream."
- Willy Wonka
:iconwretched-:
This is great, I love the choice of colors, the blue just looks really good. The main thing that bugged me, was the size of her feet, but that's been mentioned before. Other than that, I love this picture. The border is well done as well, I now remember why you're on my watch list :w00t:

Great job. :)

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One womb
One shape
One resolve
:icongiorrie:
the drawing is well done the only thing that not well done is the boring compostion together with the monotome colours

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Kicking Yourself In The Nuts Doesn't Make You More Of A Man, It'll Just Hurt.

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:icongiorrie:
oh and the forshorting of the feet isn't well done neither

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IQ = 184
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