Fallout Issue 01

EDIT: Until I can shrink the file size, I won't try reuploading to DA. However, this address works just as well:
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Right click, save as.

Ahhhh... what I've been working on for a month or more. This is the reason why I haven't been uploading anything of value lately. It took me way to long to make this. I still don't think it's up to par.

Things wrong with it:

1-Text is way too small. Sorry. I'm working on a actual typed font version, before I send it off to the Tokyopop contest.
2-It gets very Locke-esque toward the end.
3-Contrast changes on every page.
4-Proportions and sketching style change on every page. I'm not very good at proportions yet ;_;
5-The pages probably don't match up correctly, if printed in manga format (because of the double pages)
6-It's only in black and white - I will upload the colored pictures later. There's about 4 of them.
7-One of the frames is something I drew like a year ago.
8-A lot of the pages are just full-page pin-ups. I consider that a cop-out, because this is supposed to be a comic, not an illustrated novel (but it *will* be an illustrated novel eventually)
9-Lack of speech bubbles may make it hard to follow who is talking and when. I tried to make it obvious. Hopefully, IF you can read the text, you'll be able to understand what's going on.

The zipfile contains all 22 pages, and the cover. It's about 3mb. If you download it, please take the time to comment on it or give me feedback... I spent countless, countless hours on this and I consider it my magnum opus.. of the moment.

Mihi Angelam Mitte translates to "Send Me An Angel" in Latin.

If you try to rip any of the images or characters, I will hunt you down relentlessly ^_^ Not that they're very original to begin with... but humor me a little.

I've ranted too much. Just view teh stupdi manga.